Comments for Furious Five http://room162d.edublogs.org Wed, 04 May 2011 20:50:50 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 Comment on The Battle of Marathon by Edgar http://room162d.edublogs.org/2011/04/18/the-battle-of-marathon/comment-page-1/#comment-87 Edgar Wed, 04 May 2011 20:50:50 +0000 http://room162d.edublogs.org/?p=758#comment-87 Thanks for writing down a comment. Also thanks for writing down some errors that you found. I will work on them and change them. I appreciate that You commented on my blog post. Thanks Uncle!!! Thanks for writing down a comment. Also thanks for writing down some errors that you found. I will work on them and change them. I appreciate that You commented on my blog post. Thanks Uncle!!!

]]> Comment on The Battle of Marathon by Jose Morales http://room162d.edublogs.org/2011/04/18/the-battle-of-marathon/comment-page-1/#comment-86 Jose Morales Mon, 02 May 2011 04:25:49 +0000 http://room162d.edublogs.org/?p=758#comment-86 he essay is well written, short and to the point. However, there were some mistakes that can be well improve by reading your essay aloud. This is what i could see that stood out. * I feel like you need to explain Who are you talking about when you say "WE" at the binning of the essay. May we the athenians. *There was hundreds "change to were hundreds *If you can describe a little what you refer by Marathon maybe in a sentence if it is the battle? *The sentence where it says "They had left the water a dark red color from all the blood taken out of the soldiers" try to fix it it does no sound right. Maybe the water was reddish from the bloodies battle fought by the athenians. * There were bodies floating..... *Then they finally surrounded *The remaining of the Persians the battle ships, but we killed all of those enemies. " There were persians in the battle ships, but we killed most of them. *a couple years later, we received news over all looks good he essay is well written, short and to the point. However, there were some mistakes that can be well improve by reading your essay aloud. This is what i could see that stood out.
* I feel like you need to explain Who are you talking about when you say “WE” at the binning of the essay. May we the athenians.
*There was hundreds “change to were hundreds
*If you can describe a little what you refer by Marathon maybe in a sentence if it is the battle?
*The sentence where it says “They had left the water a dark red color from all the blood taken out of the soldiers” try to fix it it does no sound right.
Maybe the water was reddish from the bloodies battle fought by the athenians.
* There were bodies floating…..
*Then they finally surrounded
*The remaining of the Persians the battle ships, but we killed all of those enemies. ” There were persians in the battle ships, but we killed most of them.
*a couple years later, we received news

over all looks good

]]> Comment on Math word problem 2\14\2011 by Mrs. JUdd http://room162d.edublogs.org/2011/02/16/math-word-problem-2142011/comment-page-1/#comment-84 Mrs. JUdd Sat, 19 Feb 2011 05:52:21 +0000 http://room162d.edublogs.org/?p=741#comment-84 Hi Joel, You have done a very nice job. I'm glad that the GAllon Man helped you with this. Mrs Judd Hi Joel,

You have done a very nice job. I’m glad that the GAllon Man helped you with this.
Mrs Judd

]]> Comment on Math word problem blog Jan\31\2011 by Mrs Judd http://room162d.edublogs.org/2011/02/02/math-word-problem-blog-jan312011/comment-page-1/#comment-83 Mrs Judd Sat, 05 Feb 2011 18:04:45 +0000 http://room162d.edublogs.org/?p=731#comment-83 Hi Joel, Your explanation contains humor, which is way cool. However, you have a problem with your step 44 + (-15) * 5. Using order of operations, does addition come before multiplication? Go back and recalculate from this point then resubmit for full credit. Mrs Judd Hi Joel,

Your explanation contains humor, which is way cool. However, you have a problem with your step 44 + (-15) * 5. Using order of operations, does addition come before multiplication? Go back and recalculate from this point then resubmit for full credit.
Mrs Judd

]]> Comment on Math Problem 1/24/11 by Mrs Judd http://room162d.edublogs.org/2011/01/28/math-problem-12411/comment-page-1/#comment-82 Mrs Judd Sat, 05 Feb 2011 17:17:19 +0000 http://room162d.edublogs.org/?p=713#comment-82 Hi Edgar, Nice job on your blogs. You will receive extra credit for the additional ones. However, look at your last answer. Did you answer the question? Did she really just spend $8.80 on lunch? be careful with word problems. make sure you answer what is being asked. Mrs Judd Hi Edgar,

Nice job on your blogs. You will receive extra credit for the additional ones. However, look at your last answer. Did you answer the question? Did she really just spend $8.80 on lunch? be careful with word problems. make sure you answer what is being asked.
Mrs Judd

]]> Comment on word problem blog 1/24/11 by Mrs. JUdd http://room162d.edublogs.org/2011/01/28/word-problem-blog/comment-page-1/#comment-81 Mrs. JUdd Sat, 29 Jan 2011 19:20:27 +0000 http://room162d.edublogs.org/?p=714#comment-81 Nice use of number sense. Mrs. Judd Nice use of number sense.
Mrs. Judd

]]> Comment on Math Word Problem 1\24\2011 by Mrs. JUdd http://room162d.edublogs.org/2011/01/28/math-word-problem-1242011/comment-page-1/#comment-80 Mrs. JUdd Sat, 29 Jan 2011 19:11:00 +0000 http://room162d.edublogs.org/?p=712#comment-80 Hi Joel, You have set up your proportion correctly, however your multiplication is off. Check this again, make corrections the resubmit your blog. Mrs. Judd Hi Joel,

You have set up your proportion correctly, however your multiplication is off. Check this again, make corrections the resubmit your blog.
Mrs. Judd

]]> Comment on Math Blog Post by Mrs. Judd http://room162d.edublogs.org/2011/01/14/math-blog-post/comment-page-1/#comment-79 Mrs. Judd Thu, 20 Jan 2011 02:36:48 +0000 http://room162d.edublogs.org/?p=699#comment-79 Hi Marco, I am now able to see your response. First, you need to make sure you are adding the tags to the blog. When I multiply 12 and 15, the product is 180. How did you get 120? You need to go back and rework the problem. Remember to read the problem more than once and then pull out the important info to work the problem. Mrs. Judd Hi Marco,

I am now able to see your response. First, you need to make sure you are adding the tags to the blog.
When I multiply 12 and 15, the product is 180. How did you get 120? You need to go back and rework the problem. Remember to read the problem more than once and then pull out the important info to work the problem.

Mrs. Judd

]]> Comment on Math Question by Mrs. JUdd http://room162d.edublogs.org/2011/01/13/math-question/comment-page-1/#comment-78 Mrs. JUdd Fri, 14 Jan 2011 05:05:18 +0000 http://room162d.edublogs.org/?p=695#comment-78 Hi Edgar, Nice job. Your explanation is clear and to the point. Mrs. Judd Hi Edgar,

Nice job. Your explanation is clear and to the point.

Mrs. Judd

]]> Comment on 4 Spheres on Earth by Mrs. Judd http://room162d.edublogs.org/2010/12/06/4-spheres-on-earth/comment-page-1/#comment-77 Mrs. Judd Fri, 17 Dec 2010 03:22:06 +0000 http://room162d.edublogs.org/?p=667#comment-77 Hi Joel, Your blog is very brief. I would like to know more about all of the spheres. Hi Joel,

Your blog is very brief. I would like to know more about all of the spheres.

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